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The Creative Corner (Art Club)! [Open!]

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toma
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 15:50 (7 Years ago)
WIP, critiques please?

Gonna start inking and coloring later--


Koushi
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 16:27 (7 Years ago)
@-tomato-
Looking good!! Dresses are super hard to draw so nice going!! ʕ→ᴥ← ʔ
I don't really think I'm qualified to give criticism but a lil' something I'd recommend is lowering the opacity of the brush you use to sketch with? It helps to see all your lines of the sketch, but if you've already tried it and didn't like it, sorry!! Maybe also have a quick look at a reference of a girl of her physique facing forwards and double check the shape of her bust. Apologies if I'm misinterpreting the lines and that's her hair!!
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Since I posted the first half, here's them both;


also reposing cause I'm in need of critique, I've been staring at this for so long OTL


Could I request critique on the above two please!! (the finished one and the wip)


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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 17:25 (7 Years ago)
@thtgayguy:
Thank you lmao I'll draw more sans for you if you want pfft. I mean I like drawing him at any rate

@tomato;
Her shoulders are too stiff I think. Try making them slope downwards rather than keep them a horizontal line. Otherwise I think it looks pretty good.

@koushi:
Your art is perfect my dude I can't think of anything to critique
Luckylikeit
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 17:27 (7 Years ago)
@koushi
I can't get it out of my head, but that guy to the right on the first one reminds me soooo much of that guy from the Emperor's New Groove :o

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toma
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 17:43 (7 Years ago)
@all thank you! Yeah, the hair does curve and look like her bust, but the references I used also had her shirt be curving inwards.
goomybr
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 18:19 (7 Years ago)
Sooo... you guys know kabuto right?
This guy ?

Well, I tried to do something with with it, and I created this thing...



Dont ask me how but... I aparently made him sometype of dinossaur thingy




I-I just dont know what to say...
If you are interessed in custom sprites in the style of these feel free to contact me



Luckylikeit
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 19:06 (7 Years ago)
@goomy
I love it actually xD very creative

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TheShiny_Ninetales
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 19:17 (7 Years ago)
Furret
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 20:26 (7 Years ago)


commission for -Naoto- <3

The_Crazy_Dragon_Lady
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 21:30 (7 Years ago)
@furret
it's so cute~!
i love it
i would want to hug it so much XD

oops, i haven't posted in a while, haha
got busy with labwork
i'll share my first digital background wip i ever made
i'm not good at backgrounds
but this one turned out decent [for a wip]

goomybr
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 21:54 (7 Years ago)
#NevIsAWizard

I did this for nev and he gave me permission to post sooooo


If you are interessed in custom sprites in the style of these feel free to contact me



gelatin
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 22:29 (7 Years ago)
@ tcdl

omg that's amazing :0
how do you pick colors ?

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i did a watercolor doodle for a friendo :0
i messed up on the hand o ops

and lining near the bottom of the jacket :'v

[critiques not needed, but appreciated uwu]
TheShiny_Ninetales
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 22:31 (7 Years ago)




I never felt so proud
Commission for Rhoo
Luckylikeit
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 22:43 (7 Years ago)
@lizz
One eye is a little too small, but other than that, amazing

@nev
HOW DO YOU DO ART I MUST KNOW
(Looks amazing)

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toma
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 22:45 (7 Years ago)
@lizz the left eye is smaller, unless that was intended because of perspective.
The_Crazy_Dragon_Lady
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 22:46 (7 Years ago)
@Lizz
haha, thanks!
and....i don't know
i just, pick colours?
i wanted to draw this volcano-y thing
so yeah o3o
toma
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 22:49 (7 Years ago)
Ohyeah

I'm uploading some traditional sketches to my sta.sh as we speak!!
Luckylikeit
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Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 22:53 (7 Years ago)
@all
I was planning on uploading something today, but stuff came up >.< Tomorrow probably

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toma
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Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 00:37 (7 Years ago)
I made a danganronpa OC.

The thing is, the scanner messed with the colors so the skin color is quite odd. Probably just gonna do it in digital later.

Critiques not needed but welcome appreciated.
Luckylikeit
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Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 00:46 (7 Years ago)
@tomato
It looks good, but the eyes are crooked and one is bigger than the other

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