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Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 20:31 (7 Years ago)
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Chester without his beanie
A shiny Hypno I did to practice different angles
Just a Skull Kid
A personified Majora, would REALLY like some critique on this
As always, I would like critiquing
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 22:43 (7 Years ago)
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It starts as a larva, turns into a soldier/worker, and then the males mature into "Kings", and one female matures into the "Queen".
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 22:45 (7 Years ago)
//sweats
totally not planning anything
like confessing to a certian someone :'>
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 22:50 (7 Years ago)
they all look really good! but i think for the first drawing, the shading is too light. make it stand out a little more. for your second and third drawigs, i think the shading is too soft? i'm going to guess that you used the blur tool for shading, and while that's fine, don't do it excessively. the last one looks fine my dude. the nose is too large for normal human anatomy, but ofc anatomy can be ignored/distorted when it comes to different art styles.
@ignis:
it looks really cool! i'm excited to see more of it.
@lizzu:
YOUR ART IS ALWAYS ADORABLE OMG
anyways i drew some undertale in class today? i was bored and then. i couldn't stop myself.
(see if u can find everyone/everything.)
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 22:53 (7 Years ago)
It looks good! the only thing is that the king is too diferent from the soldier/worker.... the queen looks nice though! Do all of the especies become a king and queen? Or do they only become fully grown when they eat royal food (like royal jelly for bees)?
Here, take this:
bagde: goomybr`s ´´good`` bagde
Description: can be obtained by making a nice art
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 22:57 (7 Years ago)
@Goomy Well, I know there can be only one queen at a time, but I'm not entirely sure about the kings yet... But no, not all of them become kings. And the designs aren't entirely final yet, especially the queen's since I messed up and made her legs too small, and I don't really like the way her body looks.
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:01 (7 Years ago)
aw, well, hope you do well. You'll be missed.
@Lizzu
ee- It's so adorable- hope you do well on this plan, if you have one
@-Lance
the first thing I saw was the frying pan.
well.
It's a great drawing! I love how they all look how do you even draw Papyrus-
@Ignis
nice species! I've always been interested in alien/monster-like creatures. It's a great concept as well, are they similar to bees? with the larvae and workers, one queen and very few males, the males being "king"?
@Jam
as stated before, some darker shading on the first would be nice.
Nice work on the second- although the color going out bugged me a bit. no biggie, I'm sure it was intentional.
For the skull kid, pretty much the same as the one about the hypno.
The personified Majora looks amazing! although there are a few flyaway lines- some color, shading, and fixing up the lines would make it look better, in my opinion.
@Everyone
I'm making some pixel icons, and I'd like to know how one is turning out-
sorry if my posts are too long or critiques are too short, especially since some people don't even ask for them-
click the image above to go to my toyhou.se
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:02 (7 Years ago)
Nice! The only thing that I whould improve is that I whould like to see more of gaster, and not only his hands.
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bagde: goomybr`s ´´good`` bagde
Description: can be obtained by making a nice art
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:15 (7 Years ago)
I love the Jupiter pixel SO MUCH! Thank you~
@Everybody
I drew some things. Critique not needed, since I drew these for myself for fun .v.
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My favorite person of all time, Daveed Diggs
My main character Nev, as a Heather
idek
Jupitahhhhh
I've been messing around with shading lately.
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:16 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:17 (7 Years ago)
Sorry I haven't really been on much... I can't really critique right now either. Been kinda busy with roleplays and standardized tests... But I have
Credit to Viper
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:21 (7 Years ago)
one does not draw papyrus, papyrus comes to existence upon your canvas LMAO. tbh papyrus is rly hard for me to draw. i just. cross my fingers and hope for the best.
about your drawing, it's very cute! but since the star seems to be glowing, dont forget to apply the highlights to the character as well. C:
@goomybr:
considering i did everything with pen i couldnt erase to make room for gaster lol so i just figured his hands would be enough since that's what he's famous for.
@nev:
i think the tools you used for shading/lighting are a tad too soft/you blended a little too much. with drawings with lineart, you'll tend to not want to shade with soft brushes/blend too much. aside from that, i think it looks pretty good.
in your second drawing, your character's arms don't look right? her arms should have an elbow, and it'll usually make a sharp bend rather than a very curved one.
just touch up a little on anatomy and you'll be fine.
here are the items i drew in the pic lol:
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Burnt Pan, Stained Apron, Bisicle,
Asriel's Locket, Cinnamon Bunny, Hotdog, Instant Noodles, Ballet
Shoes, Dusty Tutu, Cowboy Hat, Faded Ribbon, Butterscotch-Cinnamon
Pie, Starfait, Manly Bandana, Toy Knife, and Sea Tea.
and the characters are:
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Monster Kid, Frisk, Chara, Asriel,
Flowey, sans, Papyrus, Napstablook, Alphys, Undyne, Toriel,
Mettaton, and Endogeny.
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:28 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:39 (7 Years ago)
i just realized how small i draw ono
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r.i.p
Posted: Fri, 12/05/2017 23:49 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 02:51 (7 Years ago)
anuway i did an artu trade with -snow-!
feedback is not necessary but is appreciated uwu
Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 08:34 (7 Years ago)
yeeeee i know its a bit of an eyeburn but i cant find any other way to make it look good ;m;
critiques are appreciated!! uwu
also, will edit this post for critiques :00
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@hoot
i like the shading omg quq
although the arm on the right(in our perspective) isn't really as big as the other one
@goomybr
It looks good!!
the flame on the end of the tail looks a bit odd though, maybe fix it up a bit?
@kotkit
awww qAq
that lil' duckling looks so adorable!!
wish i could paint something like that rip me
@delcatty
they look cute <3
although the mouth on the multi plusle looks a bit odd,
but excuse me if it's your style
@goomybr (once again)
that badge looks good!!
i like the shineeeee
@techno
Anatomy is looking great!! :00
the only thing that's bothering me is how fast the gif is and the end of the tail
@lance
omg
omg
snas looks so attractive in your style im crying
@lizz
huehuehue
nah im kidding lmao
i have no idea
@ignis
those look good!! :00
the head anatomy of the one on the down right side looks a bit odd
although if thats how they're supposed to look like that alright :>
@jj (any yoi fans)
again, the anatomy on that one looks a bit odd
but i dont know if the last one's anatomy is like that :')
but everything else looks great!!
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A lot of you guys improved!! :00
great job everybodsss
Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 13:32 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sat, 13/05/2017 14:46 (7 Years ago)
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Fluttershy(ew): me
Discord(idk how she draws him so good):thtgayguy