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Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 00:47 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 00:50 (7 Years ago)
@all
Can I get a critique on this? It's a little doodle I did when I finished standardized testing early, so it's nothing much.
Credit to Viper
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 01:34 (7 Years ago)
since it's cartoony you can ignore a lot of rules about anatomy, but i do notice that the torso takes up a good chunk of the body? shorten it slightly by making the legs longer. it's a really cute drawing though.
@tomato:
i think the eyes are too far apart and sit too close to the edges of the face. i think making the face wider and longer would make it look better?
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 01:35 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 02:47 (7 Years ago)
i was testing out a few things with the lineart haha
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 03:11 (7 Years ago)
aaa that's so cartoonish :o i dont have much critique because lance said it all but i suggest making the face a bit more symmetrical
@tomatoe
aaaa so amazing!! i love your art <3 i think the lines on the ponytail should be more curved and following the way the hair is moving though :o
@all
sorry that i haven't on as much. i'm getting a bit lazy haha. i'll try my best to stay active! here's an art dump.
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my new son, Bleppers
my other son, Cirrus. I am aware of the mistakes on his left arm and i plan to fix it later bc im lazy.
an adopt in my collab adopt shop
and another adopt
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 03:12 (7 Years ago)
aaa thanks!! ////7////
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 03:14 (7 Years ago)
Yep, I barely tried with that so I kinda waved the face off x3
@lance
Ooh, you're right, I didn't even notice that o-o
Credit to Viper
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 13:35 (7 Years ago)
finally, something digital. this is a long overdue commission for Cwend ouo
i tried a new fur shading style, and honestly i have some mixed feelings about the outcome lol
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 13:53 (7 Years ago)
Mh, Nao's not a member so chances are I can post this here without them noticing. If not, oh well, surprise ruined I guess haha.
Anyways.
WIP of Nao's Kenma!Skitty in the spoiler. .u.
The volleyball looks kinda weird?? But, um, it's the pattern the volleyball has in the anime (Haikyuu!!) so whatever idk. I'll take a short break now, though, and then start with a different piece because -cough cough- commissions -cough-.
Also yes, Dcas, ahhh. So fluffy! <3
I'm not sure what's new/different about the style - as I'm not that familiar with your (shading) style rip - but I love it. ; w;
.gif above ©Haikyuu!! official anime
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 14:35 (7 Years ago)
@Lucky
Personally, it could work as a 'simple' style for a comic or similar, but I'd suggest you to add some kind of gender marks, because it's pretty hard to tell what they are.
@Lance
Wowie, I love it! I'd fix arms on the one with green shirt, though.
@Snow
My God, I love how clear your lineart is! It's a little hard to recognise it on the furret - try making it a bit darker?
@Dcasom
Naw, it's not bad. Some lines, like on ears, hands & shoulders are somewhat messy.
@Lii
Honestly, that hair is beauty
//throws in dittos
5 min coloured sketchy, literally-
Critique not needed, but it'd be nice <3
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 14:46 (7 Years ago)
.gif above ©Haikyuu!! official anime
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 14:51 (7 Years ago)
Not really the ball. Compared to it's head's size, it's kind of strange? And it's belly looks skinny, a bit. But randomly drawing lines seems to work really good :'D
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 14:55 (7 Years ago)
aaa im glad :"D
@lunala
by messy do you mean uneven? :00
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 15:00 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 15:01 (7 Years ago)
hhh Jupiter is soooo cute ;w;
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 15:05 (7 Years ago)
@Dcas - wowowowoww you bless us with your presence
@Lucklikeit - they're a bit too skinny~
@Lii - hehe, incognito eh? tryna hide the evidence
@Lunala -
@TGG - whoa.. it looks so, symmetrical? x0x)
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 15:09 (7 Years ago)
This chibi is absolutely adorable xD i can't really say anything, i love it, maybe shading a bit more on the hair would be nice, but it's hella pretty
@Lunala
this is absolutely beautiful i love your style
Posted: Sun, 14/05/2017 15:10 (7 Years ago)