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Insert start of story 2 time line wise around the start of "6" month Trottingham to Threstralvania to Zabrica nation tour.
-Timeline requires last 2 month near Winters Gift Day and mystery magical oddity solving. Must pepper events through of war, lost newborns, failing safety and continuations of "ROUGE QUEEN"
-Look to oddities for clarification, roll back romance scenes to several pages less
-ADD to combat explantation and trade profit info.
-Need map
-Intro starts with happy times loud bang and terror times; human (james) falling and slowly sliding along a sheered off mountain top to death fall
-Pegasi who saves james must carry "Golden Streak" name in either direct say or nickname.
-COlapse out of air, Human despite massive fall unhurt. asks wounded Golden about sister
-Long quick cuts of various cutter charater incountering panic James looking for little sister Jesse. More details arise from James in descriptions as frantically travels from skrag area of mountain further along the route.
-Establish distances to show unreal distance covered in hours that would maybe take days.
-Hammer fact James ran and covered hundres of miles in short time. scattred creature types along way