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Posted: Sun, 18/08/2024 19:37 (3 Months ago)

-COrrelation of incompatable charaters, locations and time frames for fixing.
-All Anonymous court being pregnant and who stays and goes on trade trip
-secondary charaters and extended families. How they link
-charaters being in two whole locations apart. Dogs with anon on trip are also used at court when Opalessence diplomacy begins
-Age changes and time travel issues such as FLurHeart being a foal to Heiress. Anon S1 was about before conception around for some of early life but James S2 romance. Need several years between for realistic growth.
-Inventory other nations knows and dont knows and suspect.
=Hypogriffia Land has idea, HypoG Deep know
=Pony Nation skeptical as huamn=bigfoot myth with know crazy fan base (lyra example) confirmation and 2 humans correct
=Dragon Kind ~know~ etc.
+Need to inculde human warning of digits on hands, 4-5-6 fingers and willneed to decide if planet in space or alt dimension/universe.
++COnsidering pocket realms
NOTE:
Will need to display intracies of story via "hammer time moment" to later reveal the "narrator" in hammer time are gods, god like beings watching all events. Directly calling to each other over facts. Includes but not limited to Faust, Anonymous Prime, The Singularity, Death, Buddha, Jesus, Bastet, Zeus, Thor, Agwape(check spelling) and Gaia. some touched not solid: spider god from COngo, life birther from Hindi and looking at 2-3 asian based gods past Shinto.

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Posted: Sun, 18/08/2024 19:26 (3 Months ago)

Persistent story through S1 and S2
first intro is as Forever Free, living embodiement of E.Free Forest.
Heavy description required. Doesn not use real voice always note it as rocky, dry gravely. Always spend time speaking of the smell/stench/musk/odor to be overpowering mix of life, nature, rot.
Draw attention to forlegs not bending right, layers and layers of cloth/clothing and the bone deer mask and horns. (Important to have add on charter note that the skull belongs to a race lost to time. extinct. )
Must find ways to hint to "Forever Free" being immortal and involved. Refereance history events in as if there, knows things most don't, can use the "manas" of opposing power ( fire/water)
-Most non s1/s2 incusions of ForFree are for hints and direct pushes in s1 s2.
-stand alone insertions of back stories should always focus on the long journeys, guiding influence or terrible things done by ForFree for the world he lives as.
-Intro original charaters events and locations from source Gen 1 material. Possibly Story 4 being this.

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Posted: Sun, 18/08/2024 19:17 (3 Months ago)

Insert start of story 2 time line wise around the start of "6" month Trottingham to Threstralvania to Zabrica nation tour.
-Timeline requires last 2 month near Winters Gift Day and mystery magical oddity solving. Must pepper events through of war, lost newborns, failing safety and continuations of "ROUGE QUEEN"
-Look to oddities for clarification, roll back romance scenes to several pages less
-ADD to combat explantation and trade profit info.
-Need map
-Intro starts with happy times loud bang and terror times; human (james) falling and slowly sliding along a sheered off mountain top to death fall
-Pegasi who saves james must carry "Golden Streak" name in either direct say or nickname.
-COlapse out of air, Human despite massive fall unhurt. asks wounded Golden about sister
-Long quick cuts of various cutter charater incountering panic James looking for little sister Jesse. More details arise from James in descriptions as frantically travels from skrag area of mountain further along the route.
-Establish distances to show unreal distance covered in hours that would maybe take days.
-Hammer fact James ran and covered hundres of miles in short time. scattred creature types along way

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Posted: Sun, 18/08/2024 19:05 (3 Months ago)

-introduction of Anonymous in court, sweeping in via the main throne room and shifting from the dual thrones to his position
-Note of Inkwell at secondary desk, intro to service of the thrones. Establish in banter Inkwell serves the sun, Anonymous serves moon
-Slow sweep of Royal Court Hall; descriptors for the guards and attendants. ( look to story 2/3 for overlap charaters to serve as Background positions ie Stirling Silver cleaning, Perfect Shot at ready. May incorporate extended diplomats as vistors
-Draw back to banter to be harshly interrupted as arrival of Prnicess SUn and Moon are called to thrones
-Intro Sun/Moon and action of open the main doors for Day Court.

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Posted: Sun, 18/08/2024 18:51 (3 Months ago)

Badge requirement.
-Posting for Badge
-Make additonal diaries as lists
-Organize lists

-Story line names
-Story run 1
-Story run 2
-Story run 3
=Oddities of lists=

Names will be over lapping storys 1,2 and 3. Off elements of the names will be in oddities.
-Confirming S1 names as most or all main characters from basic season 1; additives as needed for flair and diversity
*P-ville
*Canter
*CryEmp
*TrotHam
*Thestralvania=

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