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Emil_
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 20:14 (7 Years ago)
(still haven't seen anybody requesting critique, except for ones on the other pages that have gotten quite a bit)

So anyways, I made a pixel of my sparrow child Tobio

I love him so much-
I dunno, I placed him in a fictional universe I made,
where birds can be fancy.
I'd like some critique on this piece, if you can, though (I realize the front foot looks odd already-)

@TCDL
aa, that's such a nice bird-dragon-thing sorry if I like, assumed it's species

@Bakume
yet again with the nice art, although it seems like you either blur or shade with the air brush? I mean, that's fine, but sometimes it looks choppy-
I never change this

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ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 20:38 (7 Years ago)
@Tech

He's precious ;w; I really don't know what to say about it honestly haha..

@All

Finished the thing I needed to know about beaks for



Critiques [on the beakage] please??

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goomybr
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 22:33 (7 Years ago)
@Tecnology
Umm... the eyes are a little bit souless and.... Im really sorry for being overdetalystyc (is that a word?) but the padern in the second feather of the tail is not the same as the feather of the second one. Other than that Its a really good drawing! What program did you use? Photoshop? Piskel? Oh and about no one asking for critics, I whould like to know what you think about this fire type dratiny that I am using as avatar. It took a lil bit of time to make but I think it looks good.

@Jamison
It looks really good! Are you thinking on coloring it or do you preffer to just leave it the way it is?
If you are interessed in custom sprites in the style of these feel free to contact me



Emil_
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 22:40 (7 Years ago)
@Goomy
I used PaintToolSAI.

As for the fire dratini, I think the flames on the... ears...? are a bit oddly shaped, and that all the flame could have a bit more to it, like bits flying out, instead of one big "blob" of fire.


@Jam
I can't really find anything to say about the beak, since I suck at front-facing beaks. I like how you added dimension, though
I never change this

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ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 22:55 (7 Years ago)
@Goomy

I might lightly color it later, or even digitalize it

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goomybr
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 22:58 (7 Years ago)
@Tecnollogy
I get what you mean with the fire blob thingy. As for the ears at the time I though ot was a cool concept but now that you said it its really kinda of weird..... BUT I can try to re-draw It tomorrow (Its too late now...)! Thanks for the tips!

@Jamison I will be looking foward for that ´´might`` then! (Y)
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Luckylikeit
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 22:58 (7 Years ago)
@Tech
I like how you did the feathers!

@James
I think it looks good! Is that your first time drawing beaks?

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ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:01 (7 Years ago)
@Lucky

Its my first successful attempt at smol beaks ;w;

...and it isn't even on a birb eue""

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Luckylikeit
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:04 (7 Years ago)
@James
Yeah, skull kid (obsessed with Zelda xD) I personally love it, especially the eyes

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Sentret
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:06 (7 Years ago)
I'm artsy fartsy, let me join!
Username: Delcatty
Thank you!
~ Hello ~


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ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:07 (7 Years ago)
@Lucky

Yeah, I actually drew the depiction Ember Labs did for their Majoras Mask short~



He's just so precious ;w;

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Luckylikeit
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:11 (7 Years ago)
@James
GAAAH I LUV IT
You are too talented I stg

(You guys are really raising the bar on me here, I still haven't posted any of my art cuz I've been too shy xD)

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ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:12 (7 Years ago)
I'm not that talented ;w;

I didn't even get the hat right ;w;

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Luckylikeit
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:37 (7 Years ago)
I thought it looked a bit off, but seriously, believe me. Better than anything I can really do. (Then again, I might just think I'm horrible when I'm not, I DUNNO.)

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ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:41 (7 Years ago)
Well try posting a little, get some tips and advice~

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Furret
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:50 (7 Years ago)
@Delcatty, accepted!

@goomy, I think that with the dratini, the line coloring on the underbelly is a bit too light & you can't really see it ^^

@Bakume - not trying to sound rude, or skeptical, but that picture you drew the other day? The one you titled "The Frozen Tree" - see I really liked that one, & now I see your most recent 2 works of art - what is with the 'style' change? I know you said you were too lazy to clean up the lines but it's a bit odd to me, how there's such a difference between them.

@Jamison - aw so small n' cute! I think the glasses are kinda slanted a bit too much, though!

ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:55 (7 Years ago)
@Furret

glasses..?? ^^" Skull Kid doesn't has glasses ^^:

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Furret
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Posted: Wed, 03/05/2017 23:59 (7 Years ago)
oH I was thinking of Tech's bird

too many borbs

ShakedownDreams
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Posted: Thu, 04/05/2017 00:00 (7 Years ago)
Aahh that's alright ^^; no worries >w<

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Posted: Thu, 04/05/2017 00:11 (7 Years ago)
@Furret
Your post really touched me! xD
I enjoy trying out different things, but now I know what people like from me, I'll do more of that art! Thanks for your thought!