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The Writing Clan (Corner)
Forum-Index → Fan Clubs → Inactive Clubs → The Writing Clan (Corner)by the way, does anyone know any good tips for writing nice, thought-provoking starter sentences? I struggle a lot with them, and I can never seem to write them so to grab the reader's attention. quq
@shiroe ooh! I have to try that! I really like what you did, though.
please help i am suffering from too many waifus and husbandos[/COLOR]
really, as long as you try to avoid common story openers I'm sure you'll be fine! Go for it! :')
Username: Seraph
What I am looking for here: Other poetry lovers!
A sample of my Writing:
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I feel so tiny
around you; I've been so
alone
my bones ache with
this longing-
maybe this one has
consumed me
the thought is so old but
the hunt is brand new
it is not enough
I think I need a connection
it is too late- to just get
a fix of your love
love is
a cat scratch
love is
you
dark circles and fractured bones
underneath my skin:
did you even see me?
did you even love me?
around you; I've been so
alone
my bones ache with
this longing-
maybe this one has
consumed me
the thought is so old but
the hunt is brand new
it is not enough
I think I need a connection
it is too late- to just get
a fix of your love
love is
a cat scratch
love is
you
dark circles and fractured bones
underneath my skin:
did you even see me?
did you even love me?
Other: #434957149 and Thank you for making this thread!!!
Username: viki123
What I am looking for here:Help for writer's block, critique and ideas.
A sample of my Writing: A bit older sample from one of my rolplays on other site.
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...Little footsteps were heard from
hallway to training room. Angel turned around only ro see her
little sister Rose walk in gym. Little girl had her chestnut hair
in cute ponytails and her big yellow eyes scanned room fast until
she noticed Angel. She run to her. ''Mom says you need to get
ready. She says it's time.'' Child spoke and than run away probably
to get ready.
Angel looked at Ulric. She wanted to cry but he hugged her in big bear hug. ''I know.'' He muttered. ''I can't tell you it will be okay but I will cover you.'' URlic smiled. ''Now go you need to change.''
Putting on suit, Angel took look in mirror. At first she needed to wear dress, but she got her mother to change her mind. 'If I could only do that to her decision about mating.' She fixed tie and applied mascara to her eyelashes. Her eyes then stopped on reflection, she only needed to add lipstick and she was ready to go. But she wasn't excited,not even a little bit. She will meet her mate for first time today, but it wasn't like she thought it would be like when she was pup. Everything changed. She heard knocking on her door. ''Yes?'' She answered only to see Ulric in suit in front of her. ''What are you doing?'' She was confused. ''You know, keeping your back. Just as I promised.'' He said that jokingly, but sadness could be heard from his voice.
''Angel!'' Rush voice of her father was heard, he walked in room pushing Ulric away. ''I hope you are ready. I will not tolerate any kind of misbehavior. You need to be pride of family and pack.'' Angel was bored of those words, she alway needs to be 'pride of family and pack'. She sighed. ''So you are ready we are going now! Your brother is ready to meet his mate.'' Angel's brother, at least the one her father was talking about, was one year younger than her. ''Yes I am ready.'' She got out of room and stood behind her mother and behind her was Ulric. They were also few more trustworthy pack members. All of them ready to protect alphas.
''Let's go they will be waiting for us on river border. '' Her father said, he is tall, muscular male with dark hair and yellow eyes, he looked more like wolf than person.
Angel looked at Ulric. She wanted to cry but he hugged her in big bear hug. ''I know.'' He muttered. ''I can't tell you it will be okay but I will cover you.'' URlic smiled. ''Now go you need to change.''
Putting on suit, Angel took look in mirror. At first she needed to wear dress, but she got her mother to change her mind. 'If I could only do that to her decision about mating.' She fixed tie and applied mascara to her eyelashes. Her eyes then stopped on reflection, she only needed to add lipstick and she was ready to go. But she wasn't excited,not even a little bit. She will meet her mate for first time today, but it wasn't like she thought it would be like when she was pup. Everything changed. She heard knocking on her door. ''Yes?'' She answered only to see Ulric in suit in front of her. ''What are you doing?'' She was confused. ''You know, keeping your back. Just as I promised.'' He said that jokingly, but sadness could be heard from his voice.
''Angel!'' Rush voice of her father was heard, he walked in room pushing Ulric away. ''I hope you are ready. I will not tolerate any kind of misbehavior. You need to be pride of family and pack.'' Angel was bored of those words, she alway needs to be 'pride of family and pack'. She sighed. ''So you are ready we are going now! Your brother is ready to meet his mate.'' Angel's brother, at least the one her father was talking about, was one year younger than her. ''Yes I am ready.'' She got out of room and stood behind her mother and behind her was Ulric. They were also few more trustworthy pack members. All of them ready to protect alphas.
''Let's go they will be waiting for us on river border. '' Her father said, he is tall, muscular male with dark hair and yellow eyes, he looked more like wolf than person.
Other: #782103933
And I'll update the prompts shortly, I've been really busy with college lately (graduating in a month and a half HELP) and been trying to focus on what I want to do with my life.
If you can read this, you know how to read.
Trick and Treat art by Podunk
ahh, I need to start finding random prompts again. I have this horrible thing where I never finish what I start, and I find if I write more, the more I don't just abandon a project. ovo
please help i am suffering from too many waifus and husbandos[/COLOR]