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Peppermint the shiny houndour.

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Keat0n
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Posted: Sun, 22/11/2020 03:47 (4 Years ago)
Peppermint is the daughter of Mint the shiny houndoom. She was born when the search for Ashpaw ( the sister of Mint) had just begun. She always got picked on for her blue color and that made her wish she was normal. The only thing keeping her from running away was her mom who never teased her or picked on her. * I'll stay because of you,mom* is what she would always think when she got bullied. This was all until they ran into pokemon hunters. When they were in the woods looking for a home, Peppermint looked away and..*Bang* there was a loud noise. That and the sound of something falling behind her. When she turned around, she saw her mom laying motionless in the snow behind her. 'N-no...Mom!' She didn't know what to do or say. She fell down to the ground crying.The only reason for her staying alive had just died behind her...



Should I make a part 2?
Ninja690
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Posted: Sun, 22/11/2020 03:55 (4 Years ago)

Title: i love it

it was so moving and so moving i love it

Keat0n
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Posted: Sun, 22/11/2020 04:13 (4 Years ago)

Title: Part 2

Peppermint layed by her unmoving mom crying.' Oh no..what will I tell Ashpaw? I can't just say that her sister died.' She sat there wondering what to tell Ashpaw and who would look after her now that her mom is gone. A few hours after burying her mom and putting a rose on top of the snow, she had made her way to where Ashpaw was last seen: in a hotel. As soon as she walked in, she saw Ashpaw, the one her mom died trying to find. ' umm Ashpaw? I've been looking for you everywhere and I don't know how to say this but....' Ashpaw looked at her like she didn't recognize her for a moment. " Is that you? I've heard my sister had a kid but I didn't know it would be shiny like her and...wait where is my sister? She said she would find me soon." Peppermint didn't know what to say.' Umm I dont know how to say this but...Mint died. She was shot by hunters.' She saw Ashpaw's eyes fill with tears." No-no this can't be...we promised that if we die, we go down together..."Peppermint sat there silently.' It does pain me that my mom died trying to find you, but I need someone to take care of me and I was wondering if you could adopt me?'" Sure, I mean you are all I have left of my sister I guess."....*Bang* that noise sounded familiar and it came from outside the hotel, then there was a scream...

Should I make a part 3?
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Posted: Sun, 22/11/2020 19:56 (4 Years ago)

Title: Part 3

When they heard the loud bang, Ashpaw just had to be the one to go outside. After a few minutes, Peppermint was tired of waiting until-* bang* after the bang, followed a small and painful howl. Peppermint didnt think much of it until it came to her mind: that Ashpaw was dead.
' no-no she promised she would come back! Why did the hunters have to come here..' Peppermint ran into the room that once belonged to Ashpaw and cried in the bed. But as soon as she was about to go to sleep, she heard foot steps in the hall outside of the room, ones that sounded human: hunters were coming. They had followed her into the room. She ran and hid on top of the fridge.' Good thing I learned how to climb this kind of material.' When the foot steps stopped, the door to the room burst open....and they were the hunters and Ashpaw. When she saw Ashpaw with them she just thought they had forced her to come." Oh Peppermint where are you? I worked for these hunters tracking you and my sister down. You really think I was sad? Well there is something called..hmm I don't know. Pretending? Hahaha."' How is Ashpaw even alive?' Is what Peppermint was thinking.

Should I make a part 4?
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Posted: Sun, 22/11/2020 20:28 (4 Years ago)

Title: Part 4

All Peppermint was thinking about is how Ashpaw was alive.' How did she make that death howl and still be alive? It makes no sense on why she would want to kill me and my mom either..' when she looked over from the top of the fridge she saw Ashpaw looking right at her with the biggest and most evil grin she had ever seen." There you are Peppermint. I hate to say this and all but freaks like you should be dying from how different you are. It's a shame how my mom treated Mint better then me since she was blue and not normal. If I were her, I would've killed her on sight." 'W-why are you doing this Ash? I thought you were nice!" Ashpaw looked at her like she was crazy" Well heres the thing Peppermint, not only humans can change over time but us pokemon can to. And so that's what I did after I discovered that I had the power to kill my parents after I escaped from a lab." Peppermint let out a cry as Ashpaw Clawed a scar into her face." Oh how long I waited for this moment..."


Should I make a part 5?
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Posted: Sun, 22/11/2020 23:25 (4 Years ago)

Title: Part 5

As the claw of Ashpaw slowly carved her name in Peppermint's face,Peppermint had more and more tears in her eyes from how much pain there was.'please stop aunt, it hurts. Why do you want to carve your name into me?' Ashpaw had the biggest grin on her face. "Oh this? I'm just putting my signature into your face so people know I killed you my self when they see your ugly blue head on my wall! Just like Mint."* Ashpaw dug her claw farther into Peppermint's face . "And never ever call me aunt. I hate how I'm related to an ugly good for nothing blue houndour like you!"* she made her claw strike across Peppermint's face and blinded one eye...


To be continued...
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Posted: Sun, 22/11/2020 23:50 (4 Years ago)

Title: Part 6

The houndour didn't know what to say. 'So you told the hunters to kill my mom...didn't you!'Ashpaw grinned again." Yes and I dont regret it either. You have been stalling long enough soooooo time to die!" When Ashpaw went for the killing blow, a blue light surrounded Peppermint: she was evolving. When the light that was blinding Ashpaw dissapeared,the neck that she was holding no longer belonged to a houndour,but to a houndoom,one that wanted revenge. Ashpaw smirked." So you evolved huh? Well I'll just kill you like this--" A set of fangs dug into her neck as she fell to the ground,the shadows fading from her as she turned to a gray color...then there no longer stood a blue houndoom but a blue houndour.' How? I evolved but I'm a houndour again?'....


To be continued...
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Posted: Sun, 29/11/2020 22:05 (3 Years ago)
I'm afraid there wont be any more post of this. Sorry for any inconvenience