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Underfalse (my little undertale fan story)

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Fall_Night
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Posted: Tue, 26/06/2018 23:00 (6 Years ago)
[Prologue]
Voices shout and scream at eachother, bouncing off unseen walls and back to the darkness, sounds like a conversation.
"But I cant send them there!"
"We had a promise, now do it."
"Its not safe though"
"I DONT CARE, WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU ABOUT THIS, YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE WHO COULD CREATE SOMETHING WITH SUCH POWER, AND YOUR SCARED TO TEST IT!?! Im ashamed to call you my sister"
"Ok, ok I will send them but dont say I didnt warn you!"
"Shut up (scrambled) its only a matter o-!!! An asset broke out the system"
"Which one?"
"It was-"
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Posted: Mon, 20/08/2018 00:13 (6 Years ago)
[Chapter 1: The beginning?]
(Am I falling?
HOLY HECK AM I FALLING?Why cant I open my eyes?Whats goi-
OWWWWWWWWWWW
...maybe i can open my eyes now)I open my eyes to reveil a squashed bed of golden flowers, seems they didnt soften my fall. I try to call for help (why wont my mouth open? Why cant i speak?!?!)
I look around..it feels so familier but why (wait, am i inside the game? Is this undertale? No, the flowers should have softened my fall...plus who were those voices? Doesnt matter, i remember what happens...god darnit)
I walk down the halway and through the door, but he wasnt there (i thought? Where on earth is Flowey? To be honest thats a little creepy..)
I hear footsteps coming (If he isnt here whats Toriel gonna be like? Better hide)
...
I rush round a pillar, and just in time as a blood covered bipedial monster comes through, i realize that if i didnt know the game i would never recognise her except her white fur and horns, which seemed more like deer antlers shoved into her skull. her eyes were narrowed orange and she wore her normal purple outfit, but it was abit torn. Her snout looked like a dinosaurs, rows of sharp teeth pointed out
(She is taller than expected, i cant get past her..i will have to wait if she doesnt find me first)
Shoot, I had jynxed it! I knew she was gonna sniff me out, quite literally. So as me scent leads her to the flower bed i ran. I ran as fast as my legs would take me. Toriel knew she was fooled and let out a blood curdling shriek and stormed off after her prey, letting off a wave of fire. The flames scorched at my ankles as i burst through the house ahead, not stopping to see any of it. I trip as i ran down the steps and tumble at the bottom. I could feel her getting closer, i scrambled up and caught a glimpse of my hunter as i rushed round the next corner.
I shut the purple doors behind me and sit down, only to get scorched by flames coming out the top and bottom. I open my eyes, to see only darkness and two options infront, die or reset. I choose reset hesitently. Im back to bursting through the house doors, this time i dont trip on the stairs. I dont think like last time and run all the was to the next door. I stand on the snow, gasping for air, i was safe... for now.
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Posted: Mon, 10/09/2018 23:53 (6 Years ago)
[Chapter 2: Broken]
Blurred images flashed and doubled up in the bright light, I tried to see what it was but I always missed the two blurs. One was white and the other...green, both far too tall to be children. Maybe about the size of an average teen. Suddenly all I could see was the white blur, their face opened up and enveloped me in darkness.

I shot up, snow sticking to my back and in my hair. (Thank God that was a dream...but I wish this was) I was still trapped in this somewhat version of 'Undertale', a game made so you dont have to just kill everyone. I remembered the time I died and the buttons came up, a shiver ran straight through me, imagining my dead body in the ruins, battered and burned. I came back into reality and got up. (Oh wait, the camera) I walked over to the bushes in time to see the camera self destruct, luckily no flames reached me or the bush. (Well that was a blast....wait did I just make a pun? For crying out loud should've saved that for San-) I stopped dead in my tracks of thought to quickly turn around.
I jumped straight into the bush after finding myself staring into the sockets of the short skeleton himself. Next thing I know I'm dragged into the trees. I couldn't loosen his grip on my arm so I bit down on Sans' hand. He let go with a short yelp "Damnit, out of all only the seventh bites" his voice was low,as expected his appearance,however, was not.

Instead of the dark blue hoodie, Sans was wearing a red jacket with a gray shirt with a glitches right shoulder. His left pupil was just binary code. (Ok now I don't wanna find out what his genoside eye is) I decided. His shorts are pretty much the same as normal. He wore black and white trainers. He wasn't smiling either. I looked up to realize he was staring at me like I was meant to do something "Well?...you weren't listening where you" I shake my head "we are gonna need some work done" Still unable to talk, I tilt my head in question. He teleports away and then back with a small mirror. I look in the mirror. (WHAT HAPPENED TO MY MOUTH?!?)

I was mouthless. Completely. You know that saying 'wipe that smile off your face' yeah, litterly. Sans handed me a pencil and a notepad, it was A5 and said it had 150pages. I stare at him. "unless you want half your face ripped off I suggest you stick to the pad. I know you know who i am so what's your name"
I can't remember the binary in Sans' eye began to move "FR15K*. That's the file they called you. So Frisk should do nicely"
they?

*y'all wanna be all technical? 0100011001010010001100010011010101001011
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Posted: Fri, 14/09/2018 02:51 (6 Years ago)
[Chapter 3: The loved and lost]
Sans explained everything to me, the best I can do is tell you as much. He told me two people, currently known as Control and Beta, from this world took over a computer every 5 years to entrap a human, seven humans before me. Sans was only a child when the first human came but that was not their doing. All the rest was by C&B and had lost either the abiltity to speak or see, Sans had tried to help the first, who lost their mouth, but instead their face disintegrated, leaving their soul for the two. Seven souls are needed to escape the digital realm forever. My body is still out the computer with no pulse, I get moved from the computer I die in both worlds. People didn't like humans invading their perfect world all the years so they tried going out of system but it was too late, Control and Beta already had started modifying this world, starting with Flowey all the way up to Asgore. Only two have ever broke out and survived and if something is imperfect or breaks out, that something get deleted. Only one can prevent that. I am safe from getting deleted, C&B would never delete such powerful data and they would have to come into this world to take me back which is deadly dangerous for them.

We have made it to the cave with the locked door in Snowdin Forest without being seen. Sans knocked on the door "Hey, TF open up" unlocking sounds came from the door " Secrets aren't affected by the change except appearance. So we are safe here" the door opened and a dog like figure in an orange jacket shoved them both inside.
"Hello, you must be Frisk. I'm Toby, Toby J. Fox. J stands for Joke, don't ask" how did he do that? "just by looking at someone he knows their name, age and power, did I miss something?" "You missed that i can see if someone is from this world or another. Anyway, rest up. We have a long trip ahead, I knew you were coming as soon as it hit the 35th year. "Toby pointed at the three neat beds with his tail. I settled down on the far side, sans went in the bed next to me and Toby went to bed in the last one.
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Posted: Sun, 16/09/2018 23:09 (6 Years ago)
[Chapter 4: Where Trust Lies]
Back in the darkness of my dreams I listened to the voices as they went at each other again.
"What do you mean we lost her!"
"He has her, we cant-"
"Can't what? Get her back on course? We have lost her since they first met!" Clatters and smashes fill the black "Its too late, he will kill her aswell. And he won't give the soul to us."
"But-"
"He will, there's no doubt. Our test run was killed by him what makes her different? He will absorb her soul and come for us. Just like the first"

I didn't stand to listen to more, I woke still in Toby's cave and made a run for it. They were all the same, these monsters know nothing other than kill in this world. I knew Sans would find me but ran anyway. The snow chilled my feet the longer I ran but it wasn't for long. The forest branches seemed to reach and grab me, scarring my arms and making my legs bleed. I had to stop, another step and I was sure I would collapse. My vision darkened before I blacked out.

"I need her, give her back" I could just here Sans' voice along with another as I kept my eyes shut"and I thought we had a deal. I don't have to dump her back in the river do I?" "Navis, you know that's going too far! Give her back" "you can't even manipulate gravity anymore" I took my chance, but unfortunately I was upside down so it wasn't that effective. I head butted the person holding me in the knee, at least they dropped me. I couldnt run to Sans but I couldn't go anywhere, we were in the river on a boat. And the one I head butted was the riverperson himself?herself?....themself.
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Posted: Fri, 21/09/2018 21:25 (6 Years ago)
[Chapter 5: Friends before Foes]
"Frisk, whats wrong?" Sans was able to get us off the boat and now he wanted to talk. I just stared, I didnt move and i had left the pad in Toby's cave. "You fled, you just waited and fled. Why?" I turned my head. I couldnt stand to look into those questioning eye sockets. "TELL ME WHY GOD DAMN IT" He grabbed my arms and stared at me. I was so scared, everything was a blur, I didnt know what I was doing...
I ripped my left arm from his grip and kicked him in the ribs. He let go of my right arm and stumbled back, blood streaming out of his mouth. I came back to reality. I was shocked to see him standing there still, or at least for those two seconds as he began to fall back. I picked him up.
"Thats..thats one way to..take 1HP, bud" I signalled for him to shut up and I took him back to the cave, Toby was already there. He brought us inside and lay Sans against the wall.
"You're lucky you didnt hit his SOUL" Toby handed him some soup "You was merely half an inch away. But that kick was strong, were did you learn" I picked up my old pad kickboxing "Cool! Anyway, I shall take this time to show you how to check someones health and what their soul looks like, take your right hand and place it on where Sans heart should be" I nodded and did as i was told, the world around me turned into the battle screen I am used to. I looked down to see a monster soul, but it kept switching between binary code, static, glitching and its normal look. I withdrew my hand and the world turned back.
"What did you expect, Im half deleted" I still didnt trust him.
"Frisk can you come with me please Toby leaded me out the door.
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Posted: Fri, 14/12/2018 22:31 (5 Years ago)
[This may not continue due to lack of storyline ideas, sorry anyone who enjoyed this]
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Posted: Fri, 21/12/2018 09:58 (5 Years ago)
(Awww man I only just got into this)
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Posted: Fri, 15/02/2019 23:31 (5 Years ago)
(I might carry on in future but dont get your hopes up.)
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Posted: Sat, 07/09/2019 01:35 (5 Years ago)
[Chapter 6:The Slice Of Metal]
I followed the white pup outside, the cold air bit at my lungs.
"I'm scared for you. Something's up in Snowdin. You should be careful next time you leave. Sans left this house to find you with 2.5HP. He came back with close to nothing. If you only took 1HP. Whoever took the rest means business. And they probably are a threat to someone whose done only pacifist routes and one neutral"
How did you..??
"I have my tricks" he winked, I knew better then to ask. We stood in the bitter cold for a few minutes, his soft paw on my back.
"c'mon, let get ba-"his words were cut off by the scrape of metal against bone and the splatter of crimson blood. Toby fell onto his knees and then back. I caught him before his body hit the floor. The attacker has wearing a long black cloak and hood, their face covered by shadow and their blade in blood and dust. They disappeared quicker that they appeared.
"f...frisk" the dog murmered, his body slowly dusted away. The cozy orange fabric of his jacket was still warm. That's when Sans came through the door
"Hey, you lot ha......." my eyes welled with tears, I wished I could speak. I wish I could tell him what happened. Before I knew it, I was being dragged away by my feet. My screams, muffled by my missing mouth, where knocked out of me when Sans threw me into a tree. I felt his rough finger bones clasp round my neck and lift me up. All common sense fled me, replaced by panic and pain. My legs swung wildly, my fingers clawed desperately at his arm, fear felt like a twisting sickness as it coursed through my body and sparked my eyes with more tears. My limbs began to go numb, the outer edges of my vision blacked and faded. I could only see Sans' expressionless face, his sockets empty. My desperate clawing turned into feeble little hits. Sans shook his head, released me, and paced about, hands on his head. I fell to the floor, laying on my knees and forearms with one of my hands hovering over my throat. I felt the colour return to my face and the fresh,crisp air fill my lungs. My eyes drifted up to the skeleton. I moved my hand from near my throat and write my message in the snow
I didnt kill him tears still dribbled down my cheeks.
His gaze met mine. Sans stopped pacing and stood, glaring at me. He picked up a gray rock. "And who would beleive you?" he hurtled it at me, cutting my ear and hitting the tree behind me. Gray and brown debris pattered onto my back. My shaking hands write another message Nobody
...
...
"Except me"
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Posted: Tue, 01/10/2019 21:53 (5 Years ago)
[Chapter 7: Trust Is A Hard Thing]
Seconds, Minutes, Hours could have passed and I still wouldn't have known
The skeleton slumped against the tree opposite me, tossing another gray rock up and back into his hand. His expression showed anger, sadness and...fright? What did someone like sans have to be scared of?
After my previous encounter with Sans and stones, I sat up and brought my knees to my chest, bringing my head down. I hoped it would make me a smaller target. He looked over at me from the tree. "You ain't scared of bats are you?" I shook my head, confused. The flap of leather wings and a sizzle announced their arrival.
A swarm of bats flew over, screeching and squealing. Their wings carried sparks and flames that did not hurt them.
"Little curse isnt it? Every night, those bats fly over the whole underground, and make their way to the Barrier. No one knows how they get out or back in but they do. Rumours of the bats being Control and Betas eyes so they can see what's happening"
He lay the rock down and walked closer to me. I tried to shuffle back but the tree behind me felt me pressed up against it. He crouched down right infront of me, and his hand grasped my lower jaw on the left side, I flinched but it didnt release my cheek
"But I know the truth" he stroked the skin beneath my eye, showing it abit more. I tingle of fear raced my spine "You are HER eyes, my little bat. The one they call Beta looks through you and those golden brown eyes" he lifted my head closer to his "better start sayin' your prayers"
Sans walked away, leaving me up against the tree, frightened. I single thought traced my mind
It's all just a fake, a game
Welcome to Underfalse, Frisk

(Sorry bout the small post)
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Posted: Sun, 17/11/2019 16:07 (5 Years ago)
[Chapter 8: fake fake FAKE FAKE]
Adrenaline suddenly rushed through me. I grabbed the sharpest stick I could grab and leaped up, charging at Sans. It would matter. I aimed to strike
Thud!
I felt something hard latch onto my arm. I looked aside and saw sans hand around my wrist, my body flopped like a fish when he held my arm up, making me inches above the floor. (How?! NO!!) Over his green binary eye was a thick, blood red X. The sight made my body fill with fear again.
Crack!
A scream begged to come out of my covered mouth. The skeleton and just broken my arm like a twig. I was dropped once again to the floor. My eyes looked up at Sans with anger and a flash of hatred. His emotionless face didnt even flinch
"So that's how you think of me... well then I better leave you. Before you do anything more stupid" and with a blink he was gone. I curled up on the floor, hugging my broken arm. And fell into the darkness of sleep.

(Hey, Fall here. I know this was a short episode but I'm lacking inspiration right now. I'll try to make the next one bigger)
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Posted: Sun, 03/05/2020 04:37 (4 Years ago)
[Chapter 9: A Soft Welcome]

A whine rose in my throat as I tried to get up without using my, now broken, right arm. Before i opened my eyes i realized that I was no longer in snow, but what felt like a bed? A soft, sweet voice whispered "Shh,shh its okay. Lie back down you are safe here" Not wanting to anger the person who might of saved me, i lay back down. I felt two furred paws carefully take my broken arm from next to me. Another whine raised, muffled by my non existent mouth, and she apologized
"What kind of sick creature would leave a human child in such a state" I couldve laughed, this lovely monster just called sans a sick creature without knowing it. He did seem to like causing me pain and more trouble then what it was worth. I decided to open my eye a little to have a look at who was taking care of me. But before i could, a wave of soothing magic spread through my arm, making me want to snuggle into the bed. " you are safe now, when you regain some energy i am downstairs. "
I wanted to protest if i could but my body was too worn out, the mysterious saver left as i fell into rest.
It mustve been an hour that i was asleep, i climbed out of bed, noticing a rather inviting pastry on the side with a note saying: For the human. (CinnaBuns!) The Cinnamon Bunny looked adorable and tasty, i couldnt resist a bite while it was still warm. After finishing the treat, i went downstairs to find the monster. A tall, light peach bunny was walking around, humming a tune.
(Its the Innkeeper!)
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