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Light Of Alola || RP
Forum-Index → Roleplay → Pokémon RP → Light Of Alola || RP"try to be literate" and "no godmodding" - first, you're both using one lines that barely continue the plot. Please write at least 2 sentences, it's really bugging me. second, nightwing, you've used textspeak "btw" and don't put periods at the end of your sentences.
The godmodding rule- both of you guys have taken plots way out of control, and if we went through with that, the RP would probably be less than 20 pages. Don't do anything ridiculous, directly take control/influence other characters and the story.
If you break another rule, I'm gonna have to kick you from the RP.)

Doug had hung back near the Pokémon center, staying inside and not talking.
After everyone had left, he returned his Emboar to it’s pokeball and released his Marowak, stood up, and walked outside.
The quiet light of the flames on Marowak’s bone dimly lit the area around him, and it seemed Doug didn’t care much for avoiding Necromza. He stayed far behind the rest of the group, going down the mountain like he didn’t even care about Nercromza attacking him.
Cordelia listened and then she heard something. It sounded like voices to her. Cordelia stumbled toward the voices, her face showing her relief. She entered into some sort of cave and frantically looked around for life. She finally spotted some other children and made her way toward them, ignoring Sanga's nervous comments. "Um...Hello?"
Rocks from above fell in front of her, she screamed in fright.
At Lauren's scream she panicked and nearly tripped, quickly catching her balance as best she could. "What the hell?" She snapped, whipping her head around to face the source of the scream.