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Hidden Jewel [Pokemon]
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Posted: Sun, 02/10/2016 08:52 (8 Years ago)
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Hidden Jewel
The sun shined brightly. A new day being called ugly again. That is what a little here Feebas thinks. A splash of water was thrown at her direction by a school of Goldeen.
"You ugly creature!" A Luvdisc chanted.
"Get out of here, we are so polluted of your ugliness!" Another Goldeen shouted.
"You weakling!" They all shouted in unison.
No one tried to help. Not even a single Corsola. Other Pokémon there would just swim by. They looked at her with pity in their eyes.
She had enough of those painful words. She always hear insults of her physical appearance. How she'd wish to be better. The current began to move faster. She let her ugly body disappear in the waves of the cruel ocean.
Deep inside her, a golden heart in placed. She stayed humble even at times when she is insulted. She stayed alone for a long time. She envies other because of their prettiness. She stayed silent.
The current led her to a small cave not that far from the ocean. Inside, she found a no injured yet beautiful Swanna. She managed to come closer but pretty Swanna was afraid of her ugliness and went out the cave quickly. Again, Feebas felt down. No words can express her sadness. Not even a Magikarp was brave enough to be a friend of hers.
She returned back to the cruelty of the ocean. Being her appearance was not easy. Feebas received painful but true comments about her appearance. Even she heard insults like that before it still stings like Beedrill's poison jab move, it still burns hotter than Magcargo's body temperature, and also aches like Psyducks endless headaches. She heard it plentier than Machoke's fired punches every second and longer than Ninetales' life span.
How she'd wish to be better. The scale of hers where hard dirty colored cream. Her mouth was placed with thick red lining and her round big eyes made her even ugly. Her life was worse than Igglypuff's endless bouncing.
'Do they have to slap it in my face?'
By the ocean she swam past through. She didn't notice that she reached the most dangerous part of the ocean. Sharpedo's territories. Sharpedos began to swim towards her. The frown on her face is deeply placed. She was afraid and swimmed for her life. But a Sharpedo caught her tail and left her.
The ocean current and her body both disappeared. The current led her to a shore she'd never been before. She saw a young trainer, along the shabby, rocky shore.
The young lady got closer to Feebas. "Oh poor little creature. You must be injured very bad. Here eat this." She handed a Berry to her. She never had the feeling of being cared, the feeling of being loved. How very polite of that young lady.
She quickly regained her health. She wiggled her fins. She really like to join her in the journey that awaits. The young trainer was about to leave when she noticed that Feebas is wiggling her fins. The lady smiled.
"Okay, but first battle me." Feebas agreed. A bit of nervousness around her aura. She never had been a battle before. Battling wasn't in her line.
The young trainer let out a Seaking. They battled well. But only she ended with defeat. She felt like the world crashed in her. The hope while ago vanished quickly in thin air.
"You can always join me." The young trainer said and smiled. Feebas bursted in tears of joy. The trainer ran and hugged Feebas. This young trainer brought out Blue, Indigo pokeblocks and a Prism Scale, which was out of his mind that it can evolve a Feebas. It made contact with the scale and ate a lot of the pokeblocks. A few seconds later. A dazzling gleam of light shined upon Feebas. She was evolving.
Her ugly dirty cream body turned to a Dragonair like body. Her rough scales we're replaced with pretty colored ones. The going big eyes were transformed to chunky pretty ones.
She saw her reflection in the water. She turned a beautiful creature she'd always wished before. "Now you can join me. Well if that's what you want." The trainer said and flashed a smile. She poked the Pokéball poked with her head as a sign of acceptance.
She was sent out the Pokéball. The trainer hugged her once again.
"Hi Milotic, I'm Wallace. We will travel around the Pokémon world and be the greatest of them all." They shared a warm group hug.
Milotic nodded. That was her most joyful experience of her life. She gained her very first friends.
Since that day, she learned lessons that she kept as she was alive and breathing.
Currently this Milotic here has traveled around the world with Allison and others beating people.
At last she experienced that heart-warming and once on a lifetime moment.
Having true friends.