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WARNING : this has a bit of gore.
im not sure if this is the right place ...but i started to make a story and am wondering how it is so far this is the first chapter ...
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Stanley stared intently at the thirteen abduction sites and one dump site where three of the bodies have been recovered. All shot in the head with a .44 Magnum Desert Eagle and all with no organs. Stanley scratched his short brown hair then said to his partner, Denise Monroe (detective Monroe), ”I don’t understand … we have almost all the cops in the city and we haven’t found a single body. How can they be keeping possibly three women and seven men? They were mostly athletic and were abducted the same day between the hours of 4:15- 5:50 so we know there must be more than one person involved.” Denise thought for a moment then said. “If there are a possible ten people in the same building who we know are not chained up and most are very fit then why don’t they try to run? Also, the bodies all had their phone in their pocket why not just phone? “Maybe they weren’t abducted and maybe they willingly went with these people. Got to know them then took them back to the place where their holding them.” Said Stanly “if there’s more than one captor how can we find any new friends In common between the men and women abducted and the three victims? And most of these people don’t even come from Vancouver, Some as far as Hope which is two hours away. And they weren’t even in Vancouver at the time. They were - *DING DING* Denise reached into hear pocket and grabbed her phone her eyes widened than she said “A couple in Mission claim to have seen a man in a black coat take a women who fits the description Alexandra Welch.” To Mission they declared.

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