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Tires screamed and lights flashed revealing black roades scattered with glass fragments.
The door of a car opened and a man came out. The man stared at the mess of cars crashed so bad he couldn't make witch one was his. He fled. After a few minutes later a car stopped. A woman stepped out. Seeing the horrible mess and the spiling blood, she screamed.
A girl with a long, deep cut, splling with blood, and orange hair stepped out of one of the broken doors of the cars.
The girl looked horrified when she saw the horrible site and froze. But the girl went back in the mess of cars and dragged another girl with fair, blond hair, out.
The girl shook the blond girl, shouting at her, willing her to wake up.
The blond girl had a scratch on the cheek and a deep cut in her left hand and stomach.
Sirens rang, filling the silent night air with its ringing.
People came out of the ambulance and took the girls in, one conscious and one not.

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