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The man who died trying (sad)

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Spootiful
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:26 (9 Years ago)
Summary: There was a young trainer at the age of 36 who took a dare that changed his life FOREVER

One day A young trainer was at a party with his friends playing truth or dare, He chose dare. It was in the winter and it was below 0° outside, it was -70°F and his dare was to go through the forest and meet them at the camp, He could bring a tent, a sleeping bag, his suicune, his knife, and an extra pair of clothes. He took it which was not a very smart idea to do.

Once he was at the begining of the forest he regretted it but he started walking anyway while his friend drove to the end of the scary forest. His suicune lead the man to a small fire pit he could use. He didn't know how to start a fire but he tried and tried. He couldn't do it and his hands froze. He ran into the tent becaue it hurt to breath that cold, cold air so he took a nap.

When he woke up, he couldn't move at all, he was so cold. He talked to himself and said,"What if I kill the suicune and climb inside him like that other trainer did to his suicune?" He jumped at the suicune with his knife but he couldn't kill it because his hands were frozen. He tried to get warm but the SNOW made it worse. He couldn't handle it. He had lost the dare, and his life.

Once he was dead that poor suicune ran up the trail to try to alert his friends but on the way a man stopped him, it looked just like his owner but it wasn't it couldn't be. He tried to run past him but he heard a gun shot. The young trainer was dead, and so was the suicune. His friends worried about him when he never came back but when they ran into the forest, they found the dog with a bullet in him and tried to run. One was killed but the other 2 made it back to safety. They NEVER talked about it, again.
~Kinny
bladehell
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:31 (9 Years ago)
wow creepy and sad

ben4arm
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:38 (9 Years ago)
I am creeped out I would never do that well I actually would if I had a suicune maybe (BTW a suicune wouldent really die that easily I think)
Spootiful
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:39 (9 Years ago)
@Blade I find that as a compliment

@ben4arm I was actually gonna say it was a dog but I had to change it to relate to pokemon so :3
~Kinny
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:42 (9 Years ago)
(Almost) everyone dies, a story to my liking. >: D

The story flows forward quite fast but I was still able to keep track of what was happening pretty easily. :3

Also, I can't stop wondering who that guy with the gun was. A random homicidal maniac in the woods or the trainer's ghost who got a gun from Death? :p
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Spootiful
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:43 (9 Years ago)
@Finhawk It could be the trainer's twin brother :P
~Kinny
Finland
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:44 (9 Years ago)
My cat read it
Hitomoshi
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:54 (9 Years ago)
Amazing!
It's short but tells a long story somehow. ;p
ben4arm
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:57 (9 Years ago)
So sad ~ When he woke up, he couldn't move at all, he was so cold. He talked to himself and said,"What if I kill the suicune and climb inside him like that other trainer did to his suicune?" He jumped at the suicune with his knife but he couldn't kill it because his hands were frozen. He tried to get warm but the SNOW made it worse. He couldn't handle it. He had lost the dare, and his life.
_ No no no I mean the suicine not the trainer the trainer tried to kill him/her :/ (Btw you could make a part 2! it could be about the remaining 2 who are alive and the guy with the gun and maybe they meet more people)
Spootiful
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Posted: Tue, 23/12/2014 17:59 (9 Years ago)
@Miss Lol ok tell me if she/he liked it

@Hitomoshie Ty i am glad you enjoyed it and I know it does :P

@Ben4arm Maybe I will depends on how many people want to or like it :3
~Kinny