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The girl who was Hatred [CREEPYPASTA]

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Remilia-Scarlet
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Posted: Sat, 20/12/2014 11:23 (9 Years ago)
The girl lived in house without roof.
There was her parents who called her stupid and useless. Her name was Lisa Mona.
She walked to kitchen and picked knife. When her parents were back from work, she ripped her parent's neck and took their skull from head out. They were finnaly dead. She hanged her parent's corpses on basement.
''Who would go to this house on Halloween?''
Probraly two mans who don't know if this house is haunted.
They went to the house, to have a Halloween party.
As they went in the wind became colder and faster...
One of the mans said '' There are cold. Are you sure we going have halloween party here?''
The second man said ''Of course yes! Hahaha...Are you scaredy cat?'' He laughs.
First man said ''I am not! Well then let's see what's in this room'' He pointed to the rooms door.
As they walked into the room the blood on the floor become more crimson.
There on the floor was laying mulilated corpses.
The first man went insane and killed second man. He said ''You're worthless I HATE YOU!''.
First man went to second room. In it there was statues crying blood.
He said ''Is it dream?''.
He was curious.
A witch flied on room ''No, it's not dream.''
The man got nigthblind.
He tried to ligth a candle.
It worked. The man was walking down to stairs, to basement.
He saw a girl crying ''Why are you crying?' He said.
The girl continued crying ''En...En...''.
''Where's your mother?''
The girl cried ''En..en...en..''
Th cries become lower and lower.
Man said ''Where's your father?''
She immediately stopped crying and took her knife out.
The girl stabbed man to death and he died.
She was Lisa Mona...
Lisa walked up to stairs and jumped out from window.
''The girl killed herself''

Never visit this house again


It's my first creepypasta I ever made so please say if it's bad or anything.
Impure--Angel
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Posted: Sat, 20/12/2014 11:28 (9 Years ago)
BETAIFULL i scared my cousin that has 20 years with ti XD


Remilia-Scarlet
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Posted: Sat, 20/12/2014 11:31 (9 Years ago)
Wow I did not know my stories are creepy to scare someone :D
Impure--Angel
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Posted: Sat, 20/12/2014 11:31 (9 Years ago)
But i Did XD


Remilia-Scarlet
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Posted: Sat, 20/12/2014 11:32 (9 Years ago)
The ending for the fanfiction is a bit copied from Yume Nikki where Madotsuki jumped out of roof.
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Posted: Sat, 20/12/2014 11:35 (9 Years ago)
Emmmm. Wow.
Sure a creepy history.
Could you write another one please.?!
PLEASE!!!
Plz a Little help.

My spetial one.(Copying my friend Eryani)







Pet's name: Terra


Remilia-Scarlet
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Posted: Sat, 20/12/2014 11:37 (9 Years ago)
Okay I will make one later.
aeria
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Posted: Tue, 30/12/2014 12:08 (9 Years ago)

Title: ^^

nice ><
eisner
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Posted: Tue, 30/12/2014 13:07 (9 Years ago)
It's okay...But the story can improve.

I'll give it a 7/10

Now, I'd say that's a task well taken care of! Uh… were you expecting something more?