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Posted: Thu, 18/06/2015 21:22 (9 Years ago)
I'm so sorry I just started typing, and look what happened. I do this too often.
It's a tiny plot from me, but maybe it'll give you ideas! ...even though you have tons and tons as it is, oh no. :'D

... um, sometimes - when a story is just starting out - I may or may not spout facts and exclamation marks endlessly. It's not supposed to be taken seriously. In fact, just laugh. That'll make everything better.

*laughs*

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How about: the dude she runs into is a servant aboard the ship, but is also the heir to the warring Ninja faction's throne, and a Ninja spy! He tricks the scallywags into thinking Camilla is important - "she's the key to obtaining a legendary hoard of treasure!" Naturally, they figure they might as well try it and kidnap her (Magell sneaks along for the ride).

Days pass! The secret prince feels guilty for using Camilla like this (even though the pirates are mildly polite and take good care of her).

They arrive at the fabled cavern on an island, whose mountains of gold is hidden away behind a door. This barrier can only be opened by true royalty, or so the legend goes. (insert fairy tale about the treasure belonging to a rich dead dude here.) It's never been tested, since everyone knows pirates aren't close on the family tree to kings and queens, and actual rulers are too well guarded to be taken.

(The pirates wonder why it was so easy to kidnap Camilla. They don't wonder for long; it hurts to be deep in thought.)

Because pirates need their sleep, they take the night off and decide to try in the morning. The nameless prince sneaks off.

Camilla watches him go, confused at the servant's actions. They were almost friends at this point. She follows him! She lurks as he tries to open the door and fails! He heads back to the camp, frustrated at himself.

(He was sure, being an actual prince and all, that he'd be able to get to the treasure.)

She stays and heads for the door herself!

Her hand reaches for it....

...suspense....

...intense descriptions of the surrounding areas...

...waiting for the perfect moment to reveal that

SHE can get in! Somehow, she's royalty!

Because the wild animals that raised her consider her their princess, and her bond with them is stronger than the prince's ties with his family (he's actually not doing this for them, but planning to take the gold for himself).

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After that, I don't know. This plot kind of just... happened. XD

I wonder what she'd do with the gold? Give it to the pirates anyways? Build a sanctuary back at home? Start a wildlife charity foundation??

Ninja make everything more awesome!

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Posted: Thu, 18/06/2015 20:39 (9 Years ago)
Actually, I'd suggest using both, if you want. Tie it in together somehow - make the prince a part of the pirate-kidnapping plot or something. New stories have a ton of potential; maybe confusing, always awesome. :'3

I'm not writing a ton these days (I'm still a bit burned out from last NaNo), but I'm gonna try to get back in the game this week. aka, finishing some prompts! Thanks guys, just the thought of this clan makes me wanna write. ;w;

Uhhh, lesse... if you need any specific help writing (for example, grammar? or spelling? or continuity, descriptions, pacing, etc.?) I can probably help out at least a lil tiny bit.

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Posted: Wed, 17/06/2015 10:52 (9 Years ago)
Hey, I'm a writer!
Username: Ufimtsev
What I am looking for here: A cute little corner where I get to see who else writes. Maybe stumble upon some fellow Wrimos or stray Frenzy-goers. Giving critiques, possibly, but mostly an excuse to read other peoples' works. ouo
A sample of my Writing:
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Um. For now it'll be something extremely small, pulled out of an in-progress piece... since most of it's unedited. And I'm not at a desktop, thus ease is not on my side.

The North Star shone so unremarkably in its place far above him. Danny could clearly see the constellations and asterisms that riddled the deep, dark fabric of space — within sight was Orion's Belt, three twinkling stitches in the very midst of four.

Ursa Major caught his eye; gracefully stretched to cover a magnificent portion of the heavens as well — shining, glimmering over his head. The celestial objects emanated a sort of higher glory from where they rested, there — in the vast, otherwise empty, expanse.

They cried with him. They cried endless tears of shooting stars, pulsing and streaking across the sky and beyond the earth, glimpses of white piercing the veil. Echoing sorrow in his pained, strained core.

Dipper Pines was somewhere up there, Danny was sure. Somewhere, watching his mourning twin sister from a throne of bright starlight.


aka: in which the Gravity Falls fandom deeply regrets inviting me to the party

Other: Thank you for creating this beautiful corner! (and when people run in circles it's a very very mad world, don'tcha know)


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Posted: Tue, 05/08/2014 23:13 (10 Years ago)
Here's To Us by Nova-Dragon Kevin Rudolf. 8D

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Posted: Sun, 03/08/2014 06:13 (10 Years ago)
9/10

It's nice, cute, and square...I'm not really sure what would make it better, but I feel like a 9 is okay. xD
judge my crown of flowers I'm really only posting 'cuz I finally changed my avatar, but whatever, you know? :p

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Posted: Sat, 02/08/2014 23:25 (10 Years ago)
Superhero by Tim McMorris~

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Posted: Thu, 03/07/2014 23:42 (10 Years ago)
Actually, I wouldn't mind if the next person sends me a Magikarp. :p

Gifting Larverto a Psyduck since he doesn't have one yet~

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Posted: Thu, 03/07/2014 01:30 (10 Years ago)
Aww, yeah! Happy 1 year Anniversary, PokéHeroes~

Sincere thanks to everyone for supporting this site and making it possible. We have a great community because of you. ^^

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Posted: Thu, 03/07/2014 01:18 (10 Years ago)
I'm listening to Feels Like the End, by Shane Alexander~

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Posted: Sat, 24/05/2014 00:00 (10 Years ago)
Username: Ufimtsev
Number: 91, please!
Are ninjas cool?: Without a doubt. Ninja will always be cool. :d
Other: Apples! which you are forever King of, dear King Finhawk~ *bows*

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Posted: Tue, 06/05/2014 22:34 (10 Years ago)
Welcome, Gress and Mallie, you two are both accepted! ^__^ Just give me a few minutes to edit the first post, haha. I'm also going to start a list of members organized by which instruments they play.

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Posted: Mon, 05/05/2014 23:44 (10 Years ago)
Would you two mind if I added you to this group instead? It's newer and quite a bit more organized, haha. ^^

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Posted: Mon, 05/05/2014 03:54 (10 Years ago)
First one I remember was Kipper the Dog. After that, probably Tom & Jerry and Danny Phantom. xD

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Posted: Mon, 05/05/2014 03:49 (10 Years ago)
I hatched a shiny male Sandile a few moments ago at #51. He's beautiful! >w< I'm starting another Sandile hunt for a female~

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Posted: Thu, 01/05/2014 20:49 (10 Years ago)
Koturno (eo/Esperanto).

What is space in your language? :3

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Posted: Thu, 01/05/2014 04:10 (10 Years ago)
Here's mine! Have fun traveling~



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Posted: Thu, 01/05/2014 00:31 (10 Years ago)
Count me in! I guess I should start setting up. ^^

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Posted: Mon, 28/04/2014 05:01 (10 Years ago)
Listening with a Million Ears - Person of Interest. Yay season three.

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Posted: Mon, 28/04/2014 04:02 (10 Years ago)
Hey Harkness, I love to needlework!
Username: Ufimtsev
Nicknames: Fim, Yarly
Preferred Pronouns: She
Type(s) of needlework: Most of the time I'm crocheting, cross-stitching or sewing, but I do knit/hand-knit from time to time.
Other: If I try I may be able to find pictures of scarves and stuff I've made recently. ^__^ Oh, and I thought this article about cross-stitching looked fun. /(O_o)/

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Posted: Wed, 09/04/2014 04:00 (10 Years ago)
I Was the Sun (Before it was Cool). By Curtis Schweitzer, for the game Starbound, specifically for the Novakids.

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