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Ufimtsev OFFLINE Forum Posts: 403 |
Posted: Thu, 29/06/2017 20:36 (7 Years ago) |
i agree! it's really cute so far. i think that it's a bit dialogue-heavy (maybe sneak in some descriptions to give it a different pace) but it's a fair starting place for toying with your characters. [Read more] |
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Posted: Thu, 29/06/2017 19:07 (7 Years ago) |
even though it's short, i think you were able to lay down the ground rules pretty clearly. i'd say, moving forward, you just gotta be careful with how you deal with the phobias so you portray them respectfully, but other than that, it was a nice introduction! [Read more] |
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Posted: Wed, 28/06/2017 23:19 (7 Years ago) |
done & sent! <3 draw her (human) or them (pokemon)? [Read more] |
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Posted: Wed, 28/06/2017 23:17 (7 Years ago) |
Make yourself at home, just check the security cameras every hour! @ lindsaybug hahaha! [Read more] |
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Posted: Wed, 28/06/2017 20:29 (7 Years ago) |
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Posted: Wed, 28/06/2017 19:48 (7 Years ago) |
i see what you mean, but that's really just a technical thing, imo. i don't find it offensive or anything, but maybe instead of "race" you'd want to use the word "ethnicity" since that would cover more than just the human race (e.g., aliens). [Read more] |
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Posted: Wed, 28/06/2017 09:52 (7 Years ago) |
and/or, like mentioned previously, you could write a friendlier version and post that one publicly. [Read more] |
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Posted: Tue, 27/06/2017 23:08 (7 Years ago) |
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Posted: Tue, 27/06/2017 22:56 (7 Years ago) |
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Posted: Tue, 27/06/2017 19:14 (7 Years ago) |
Somebody / Ufimtsev Nickname?: Somebody or Ufim is fine! Favorite Genre Of Writing?: probably suspense, but i've written in pretty much every genre of writing and i like them all (except maybe romance). Other: uh,, camp nanowrimo is starting in a few days and it'll be my seventh! not including nano primes, that's another four ummm what else? oh! i've been a beta reader for years now, so if anyone wants Serious Critique(TM) hmu, i've worked with everyone from first-time fanfic authors to my published writers frenz so hopefully i can help out! [Read more] |
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Posted: Sun, 25/06/2017 03:38 (7 Years ago) |
Make yourself at home, just stay off the internet! [Read more] |
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Posted: Sat, 24/06/2017 06:28 (7 Years ago) |
take your time, and thank you in advance! <3 [Read more] |
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Posted: Sat, 24/06/2017 04:58 (7 Years ago) |
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Posted: Sat, 24/06/2017 00:17 (7 Years ago) |
Make yourself at home, just don't do magic indoors! [Read more] |
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Posted: Sat, 24/06/2017 00:15 (7 Years ago) |
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Posted: Fri, 23/06/2017 19:27 (7 Years ago) |
Make yourself at home, just keep all the lights on! [Read more] |
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Posted: Fri, 23/06/2017 05:30 (7 Years ago) |
Make yourself at home, just take what you need from the icebox if you're hungry! [Read more] |
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Posted: Thu, 22/06/2017 21:39 (7 Years ago) |
Make yourself at home, just remember to read the ghosts a bedtime story! [Read more] |
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Posted: Thu, 22/06/2017 17:00 (7 Years ago) |
Make yourself at home, just don't feed the piranhas! [Read more] |